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no, I don't think your article is 拖沓.
I don't know much about article writing or story construction but, I think you are just about the right. For most of the time, you just describe exactly what the leading roles are thinking based on their ages and their experience. I knew many people see it the same way as I do here, at least from the comments I have read so far, which were left behind each chapter. This is the first reason for my general conclusion. Second, I don't know what is your major purpose of writing this story. If you try to be a professional writer and you just want to get some experience from this story before you hit that target, that is different thing. However, if you just want to write something or educate something or teach something (educate may be too serious), your initial hope is what that matters. We are now in JJ. From my opinion, JJ is a website initially provided for people who have interest in writing our own stories. Then, it is a place for linking the writers and publishers or some other purposes. Finaly, from what I have read, I can feel you do spend lots of time and energy on the story. You are a good writer and you are responsible. I respect you and I respect everything you will do for the story or other storties you will write later on. So, just do whatever you want. Add oil!

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