书评 - 晋江文学城

I had also pondered the very long ~
Author please allow I criticize these articles.
Is I thought that this story somewhat deteriorated ><
Before to do smiles the plot, because the flower has grown up,
therefore became not that interesting ~
Although these chapters still some funny ingredients,
but was already short the opening plot have been very more.
Perhaps is the flowered knowledge recognizes the tennis prince's life gradually,
perhaps the flower starts to turn an ordinary earthman, perhaps.
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p.s. please forget above speech ~ (somebody who have crying~)
Loli the energy to continue to pour into!!!!
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oh ~ I do not deliver the minute again....作者回复：
网页一拉下来竟然看到大片英文，俺吓鸟一跳，以为走错地方或者jj抽鸟= =
俺滴英文不素很好……
乃的大概意思素——乃觉得此文米前面滴好看，素因为花子渐渐融入网球王子这个河蟹大家庭鸟，所以她将被河蟹掉，啊，不是，是被同化掉变成一个正常人……大概素这个意思吧？
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其实俺也是很苦恼啊，要是情节太诡异的话很难让王子们对她产生男女之情（= =俺这素狡辩，实际上是情节太难想，啊，说出来了），也确实是俺这段时间有点心急，怕自己更新得太慢，被筒子们怨恨……所以有时米啥好灵感也就凑合一章出来，再加上写了此文一段时间后产生那啥啥期（就是夫妇结婚几年有的那个期），老想爬墙去死神摸蓝叔，555，掩面逃……
接收萝莉力量ing~~
（握拳）俺会努力地，努力让萝莉恢复其诡异萝的身份！萝莉要变正常人，望天……米可能= =|||
俺一直在纠结：要好好发展感情的话，情节可能没那么好笑；要一直比较囧的话，感情发展又有点难……俺一定要好好思考，写出又搞笑又能有感情发展滴文来~两手抓，两手都要0~~~
摸摸，jj又抽了吧，俺吃够了jj的教训，发十个字以上的评论时俺都要复制，这样就不用打作者回复：
第二遍鸟~
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= =刚才少复制了几个字。

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