《【翻译】风弄原著《金玉王朝》》小医Potassium

19、chapter one 16

　　Nanny Zhang lunged after him, seizing him tight from behind, tears welling in her eyes as she pleaded desperately，"It’s none of your business, young master! Every family has its cross to bear.This is the thing of Madam and Master. You’ll only make it worse. You siblings have no one to lean on now. If you fall out with Master, where will your sister go? She has never tasted the bitterness of life, and the guild hall is no room for her..."
　　（tn：be no room for无容身之所，而不是have no room for，就会变成没有...的房间，意思就不一样了，这个用法很容易弄错）

　　From the living room came Xuan Daiyun’s shrill, heart-broken wails, cutting through the air. "You hit me? Nian Liangfu, you slap me on Lunar New Year’s Eve, you ungrateful fiend! Dare you kill me then! Let your superiors see how you betray those who helped you.What a vile ingrate you are!"
　　（tn：这里哭声最后选择了wail，对比sob抽泣，不够大声，weep只落泪不出声，howl哇哇叫地哭，cry只有哭没有情绪，最后还是wail既有情绪，程度也适中。
　　这里过桥抽板，是个四字词语，后面中山狼是个典故，出自《中山狼传》，都是表示忘恩负义的意思，所以这里没有实写，仍需要翻译出含义。一旦遇到这种翻译，我都有一种害怕自己是在自由发挥的恐惧感orz）

　　Xuan Huaifeng’s heart twisted. He gritting his teeth,said to Nanny Zhang,"Let me go! That beast struck my sister！I’ll get even with him！
　　Though aged, Nanny Zhang had the solid strength from a lifetime of chores. Xuan Huaifeng could not escape at once.

　　Terrified he’d rush in to confront Nian Liangfu, she clung tight to his waist, yanking him toward her small room with all her might, pleading, "It’s a common occurrence for couples to have squabbles and rows.She is still Mrs. Nian, with food, clothes and servants at her beck and call. Young master, I beg you—don’t bring her more trouble. If you won’t listen, I’ll kneel to you!" She forced him into the room and pressed him down onto a chair.

　　Xuan Huaifeng seethed with anger, his lungs stinging as if pricked by needles.