《空气之绊（下）》玉岚渊

4、作业要求

　　满分（12/12）要求：

　　Fairness and Accuracy (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The essay accurately reflects the views of the Buddha, and of any scientific studies it may refer to.
　　公正性和精确性：
　　3分：【精确】【定义】佛学观点以及涉及的科学研究
　　2分:【提出】并尝试【阐述】佛学观点以及涉及的科学研究
　　1分:仅【点明】佛学观点以及科学研究

　　Answering the question (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The answer to the question is clear at the beginning of the essay.
　　问题反馈：
　　3分:【开门见山】反馈问题观点
　　2分

　　Evidence and Argument (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The answer is supported by useful evidence and reasons. It is clear how this evidence supports the author's position.
　　论据与论证：
　　3（1.5+1.5分）:论据【精当】和【多种】论证方法。
　　2分（1+1分）:【详实的】论据和【基本】论证方法（理论说明和举例论证）
　　1分（0.5+0.5分）:举例子【关联性不强】，论证方法【无逻辑】或没有论证

　　Clarity (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The writing is easy to follow 【throughout 】the entire essay.
　　流畅度：
　　3分（1.5+1.5分）:通篇流畅。（【高级的】衔接词或逻辑词，结构连贯；【高级】句式连词，引导词，Hardly had …when…Not only，but also，No sooner …than…There is no denying the fact that，Namely……While…等）
　　2分（1+1分）：比较连贯（【标志性】的连接词；【恰当的】句子之间连接词：although，however，if…it is that，We know that…，firstly，secondly…）
　　1分:行文有较大的问题（通篇连接词and，but，then/没写完/逻辑混乱）

　　1+1.5=2.5
　　2
　　1.5+1=2.5。 2+1=3
　　3
　　10+0.5=10.5=11。 10.5—11

　　Evidence and Argument (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The answer is supported by useful evidence and reasons. It is clear how this evidence supports the author's position.

　　Clarity (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The writing is easy to follow 【throughout 】the entire essay.

　　Fairness and Accuracy (maximum 3 points)
　　3 points: The essay accurately reflects the views of the Buddha, and of any scientific studies it may refer to.

　　Answering the question (maximum 3 points)
　　2 points: The answer can be figured out by the end of the essay, but is not immediately obvious.

　　final score：11