当时我是对花花这篇文的人设很感兴趣才慢慢开始看的然后因为花花你不紧不慢不疾不徐慢慢吞吞慢条斯理（此处省略924字）的敲字速度才忍不住浮出来的\\爱德华的永远17岁的外表身体犹如雕塑皮肤苍白古铜色的头发眼圈泛紫对待爱情的小心翼翼他的一切一切都令我着迷不已相对之下我又有些不太喜欢贝拉对待爱情的犹豫不决\\爱Vian的双性格天然呆治愈萌和腹黑敢爱敢恨同情心怜悯心执著\\觉得暮光原著里爱德华和贝拉是因为血契而相爱很坑很奇怪很假但很喜欢爱德华和Vian这种竹马系的养成文\\花花把Vian青春期的情感困惑与扑朔迷离的感情纠葛刻画得真切细腻丝丝入扣的描写与洗练优雅精致微妙的笔触让我更加沉醉沁人心脾的温存与缠绵之中让我切身见证了Vian和Eward青春的璀璨初恋的美好>< PS标点符号实在无能啊 PS2花花就算不喜欢也要装作很喜欢 PS3这是人家第一次写长评花花看着办吧 小海藻 2011711 i lie awake at night See things in black and white I\'ve only got you inside my mind You know you have made me blind I lie awake and pray that you will look my way I have all this longing in my heart I knew it right from the start Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you Like I never ever loved no one before you Pretty pretty boy of mine Just tell me you love me too Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you Oh my pretty pretty boy I do Let me inside make me stay right beside you I used to write your name And put it in a frame And sometime I think I hear you call Right from my bedroom wall You stay a little while And tough me with your smile And what can I say to make you mine To tough out for you in time Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you Like I never ever loved no one before you Pretty pretty boy of mine Just tell me you love me too Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you Oh my pretty pretty boy I do Let me inside make me stay right beside you Oh pretty boy pretty boy pretty boy Say you love me too Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you Like I never ever loved no one before you Pretty pretty boy of mine Just tell me you love me too Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you Oh my pretty pretty boy I do Let me inside make me stay right beside you >pretty boy<
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当时我是对花花这篇文的人设很感兴趣才慢慢开始看的然后因为花花你不紧不慢不疾不徐慢慢吞吞慢条斯理（此处省略924字）的敲字速度才忍不住浮出来的\\爱德华的永远17岁的外表身体犹如雕塑皮肤苍白古铜色的头发眼圈泛紫对待爱情的小心翼翼他的一切一切都令我着迷不已相对之下我又有些不太喜欢贝拉对待爱情的犹豫不决\\爱Vian的双性格天然呆治愈萌和腹黑敢爱敢恨同情心怜悯心执著\\觉得暮光原著里爱德华和贝拉是因为血契而相爱很坑很奇怪很假但很喜欢爱德华和Vian这种竹马系的养成文\\花花把Vian青春期的情感困惑与扑朔迷离的感情纠葛刻画得真切细腻丝丝入扣的描写与洗练优雅精致微妙的笔触让我更加沉醉沁人心脾的温存与缠绵之中让我切身见证了Vian和Eward青春的璀璨初恋的美好><
PS标点符号实在无能啊
PS2花花就算不喜欢也要装作很喜欢
PS3这是人家第一次写长评花花看着办吧
小海藻
2011711
i lie awake at night
See things in black and white
I\'ve only got you inside my mind
You know you have made me blind
I lie awake and pray
that you will look my way
I have all this longing in my heart
I knew it right from the start
Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
Like I never ever loved no one before you
Pretty pretty boy of mine
Just tell me you love me too
Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
Let me inside make me stay right beside you
I used to write your name
And put it in a frame
And sometime I think I hear you call
Right from my bedroom wall
You stay a little while
And tough me with your smile
And what can I say to make you mine
To tough out for you in time
Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
Like I never ever loved no one before you
Pretty pretty boy of mine
Just tell me you love me too
Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
Let me inside make me stay right beside you
Oh pretty boy pretty boy pretty boy
Say you love me too
Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
Like I never ever loved no one before you
Pretty pretty boy of mine
Just tell me you love me too
Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
Let me inside make me stay right beside you
>pretty boy<
[1楼] 作者回复 [2011-07-11 22:09:04]
瓦第一次收到的长评啊..内牛满面...
抱住小海藻..蹭...
作为长评的奖励..我努力把最后一章锁住的章节修改好解锁了...抹汗...
当初开这个暮光之城的文文..也是因为不喜欢贝拉在感情面前犹豫的态度,
而爱德华,那个为了爱情奉献一切的吸血鬼...
我觉得应该是一个同样也全心全意的女孩纸才能配得上他..
于是,可爱的薇薇安被创造出来了...
咳咳,虽然现在薇薇安在感情方面还处于幼儿时期,但是...总会慢慢成长起来的..
不是么...
小海藻..么么..
正式更新会在这星期五开始的...(顶着锅盖飘走)
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[3楼] 作者回复 [2011-07-19 22:44:50]
对啊..我也才注意到...为什么没打分呢....望小海藻...
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