Sorry, cannot type Chinese here. Like this story. People will be tired of 清穿, but not a good story with suspension. Go, 红萝卜, Go. Some thoughts. I still don't get it why 瑶 strongly believes that 雍正 can send her back to the current. Did I miss something? Also 遥's face is too scary and too abnormal, which is not suitable for his role and his work. A good agent/spy is better to look like the normal people on the street, causing no interest or attention. Do you think so? Again, this is a nice story. Thank yo.
网友:GrandmaCat 打分:0 [2009-10-21 06:09:12]
Sorry, cannot type Chinese here. Like this story. People will be tired of 清穿, but not a good story with suspension. Go, 红萝卜, Go.
Some thoughts. I still don't get it why 瑶 strongly believes that 雍正 can send her back to the current. Did I miss something? Also 遥's face is too scary and too abnormal, which is not suitable for his role and his work. A good agent/spy is better to look like the normal people on the street, causing no interest or attention. Do you think so?
Again, this is a nice story.
Thank yo.
[1楼] 作者回复 [2009-10-21 08:48:31]
萝卜头会努力写文地说!
亲的疑问,亲留意一下容儿在穿越前,那假古董店的老板和那的士司机对她说的话哦。他们其实蛮明确的告诉了容儿,他们是为君上来找容儿的。回到古代,容儿将这个君上理解为皇帝。为什么这样理解,文里也有提及到哦^ ^
遥的影堂,主要的任务是拱卫暗门门主,他并非spy 哦。spy 这部分的工作是归属声闻堂的。如果真是划分的话,可能遥的工作更偏向修罗堂,也就是暗杀那部分。他可是肯为年容瑶做任何事情的哦。只要年容瑶要求XD
对了开始遥除了开始带的面具,后来一直都在换面具的。他一直是一直带面具不过并不是只带同一个面具。这点可能是我在文里没有强调,造成亲的误会。我以后要有机会修文,会把亲这点意见记下,修到文里的~大感谢亲的提醒哦~亲亲
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[2楼] 网友:123 [2009-10-22 11:05:10]
很抱歉,在这里不能打汉字。像这个故事一样,人们将会厌倦清穿。但是,并不是一个好的故事都要有铺垫。加油!
有许多的想法,我不知道为什么遥那么相信雍正会送她去?难道我错过很多地方吗? 是这样翻译吗?
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