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At first I should say Happy Birthday.
This long comment is suppose to wish you a happy birthday.
This is the first time I write a long comment.
As you can see this is an English long comment.
And I wish you have no problem reading this.
I had asked you, you said I can write it in English.
Now I should write the main part of this.
As you can see in the title is about My Feeling - about my feeling
at nearly all the story you have bee written, except for one -
“the twelve countries”.
I have been reading you story since this summer, and I would keep
reading this in the future.
The First and Second Story:
I have started read it in summer break. I like it very much.
When I was read it, my feeling is following your story as it
goes up or down. Yes, you are right, like a roller-coaster. When
come to the funny part, I would laugh so hard, that my parents
would say that I must be mad. When come to the sad part, like in
the end of the story, I feel so not right. When I saw that you got
a second part, I was dieing to reading. And you did not
disappointed to me, most of the time you update more than
2 times, I was so happy that you had done this, because that
would be the first thing I do in the morning, after I woke
up. And finally, they have a happy end, not even that you
have given them a lovely son. At first I think is
Greed Island stone or he is the Test tube Baby, and after
all I have an answer right, he is a test tube baby; even
know he is not the normal one.
This Story:
The main character is finally is the 1 person, I am very
happy for you. And I am very happy for you the second
reason is you birthday is near. And this is suppose to
make you happy, and is a wish to you. In this story,
the main character’s name is very long, I can’t hardly
remember it. And I think that is interesting. And he is
a play boy, he always do what he wants do. And I wish
I can do that. And yes, I know that is because he got
power. Yes, indeed the great power.
There is my first long comment. I hope you would like it.
I hope you will write even more story in the future.
And a big thanks to you, because your story makes my life more colorful ever.
Thank you!
作者回复：
……我应该说谢谢的，但是我还是看不懂……那么，谢谢，虽然我看不懂。

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